Write Hooks That Stop the Scroll in UAE (Templates + Arabic Examples)
Why your first 3 seconds matter (especially in the UAE)
Your audience is bilingual, busy, and brutal with the skip button. A great hook earns the next few seconds—then the story and offer earn the click. For Dubai brands running Reels, TikTok, Shorts, or PPC creatives, the hook should:
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Pinpoint a pain or promise a result (fast).
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Feel local (names, places, currency, seasonality).
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Create curiosity or tension (open a loop).
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Be short (ideally 4–12 words onscreen).
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Pair with a thumb-stopping visual or motion cue.
The 12 hook formulas (templates + EN/AR examples)
1) Problem → Relief
Template: “Struggling with [pain]? Do this.”
EN: “Struggling with Dubai leads? Do this.”
AR (Gulf): «تعاني من عملاء دبي؟ جرّب هالحل.»
2) Outcome First
Template: “Get [result] in [time]—without [objection].”
EN: “Get 5× inquiries in 30 days—without higher ad spend.”
AR: «ضاعف استفساراتك خلال 30 يوم—بدون رفع الميزانية.»
3) Local Pattern Interrupt
Template: “Dubai [industry], you’re ignoring this.”
EN: “Dubai real estate, you’re ignoring this hook.”
AR: «يا قطاع الضيافة في دبي، في نقطة قاعد تفوتكم.»
4) Numbered Fix
Template: “3 hooks I’d steal for your [niche].”
EN: “3 hooks I’d steal for your clinic ads.”
AR: «٣ مقدمات رح أسرقها لإعلانات عيادتك.»
5) Before/After Tease
Template: “Watch me turn [X] into [Y] in 30s.”
EN: “Watch me turn a slow site into 2× leads in 30s.”
AR: «شاهد كيف حوّلت موقع بطيء لضعف العملاء خلال 30 ثانية.»
6) Mistake Call-out
Template: “Stop writing hooks like this.”
EN: “Stop writing ‘We’re the best in Dubai’ hooks.”
AR: «وقفوا استخدام “نحن الأفضل في دبي” كمقدمة.»
7) Contrarian Take
Template: “Everyone says [myth]. Do this instead.”
EN: “Everyone says ‘post daily’—optimize your hook instead.”
AR: «الكل يقول نزل يومياً—الأهم قوّة البداية.»
8) Question Hook
Template: “Are your [metric] stuck at [bad number]?”
EN: “Are your Reels dying at 2 seconds?”
AR: «ريلز عندك يطيح بعد ثانيتين؟»
9) Micro-Case Proof
Template: “[Result] on [platform]—here’s the hook.”
EN: “-42% CPL on Meta—here’s the first line we used.”
AR: «خفضنا تكلفة العميل ٤٢٪ على ميتا—هذه كانت البداية.»
10) Time-Bound Challenge
Template: “I tried [strategy] for [time] in Dubai—results.”
EN: “I tried 3 hooks for 7 days in Dubai—results.”
AR: «جرّبت ٣ مقدمات لمدة أسبوع في دبي—هذه النتيجة.»
11) Curiosity + Specificity
Template: “This [weird/underused thing] beats fancy videos.”
EN: “This ugly text-only opener beats fancy edits.”
AR: «هالمقدمة النصّية البسيطة تتفوّق على المونتاج الثقيل.»
12) Offer-Led (ethical FOMO)
Template: “[Benefit] ends [time]—here’s why to care.”
EN: “Free SEO audit ends Friday—fix this one thing first.”
AR: «تدقيق SEO مجاني ينتهي الجمعة—صلّح هالنقطة أولاً.»
Pro tip: for Arabic hooks, keep lines short, avoid overly formal MSA if your brand voice is casual, and test Arabic numerals (١٢) vs standard (12) for readability.
How to write your hook (fast)
1) Start with the pain/job-to-be-done
List the top 3 pains your Dubai audience feels (e.g., “tour bookings drop off after 6pm,” “WhatsApp leads are low quality,” “site isn’t converting on mobile”).
2) Promise a specific win
Tie the hook to a measurable outcome (leads, bookings, show-ups, response time) and/or a tight time window (“in 7 days”, “in one sprint”).
3) Localise the language
Name Dubai, UAE, or neighbourhoods when relevant (Marina, JLT, Business Bay). Use AED where you mention price.
4) Keep it short (and visual)
Write 3–7 variants at 4–12 words each. Pair each with a visual thumbstop: bold text card, quick gesture, or dramatic crop.
5) Place it everywhere
Use the hook as:
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First line of VO or on-screen text (frame 0)
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First sentence of caption
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Headline text on thumbnail/cover
What to measure (so you know it’s working)
| Platform | Early “hook” metric to watch | Target to beat |
|---|---|---|
| Instagram Reels | 3-second views ÷ impressions (thumb-stop) | Improve +10–20% over your baseline |
| TikTok | Average watch time & 2s–3s hold rate | +15% hold at 3s |
| YouTube Shorts | View duration & % viewers to 50% mark | +10% viewers to 50% |
| Meta Ads | 3-sec video plays ÷ impressions | +10–15% vs control creative |
Run A/B/C: same video, three hooks. Keep the winner; rewrite the rest.
Swipe file: Dubai-specific hooks by niche
Tourism & Hospitality
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“Dubai layover? Do this 3-hour itinerary.”
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«خصم ٢٠٪ على رحلات اليوم—شاهد أفضل ٣ جولات.»
Real Estate
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“Stop listing like this. Start with this.”
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«٣ أخطاء تخلي إعلان شقتك ما يبيع.»
Clinics & Aesthetics
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“Stop saying ‘painless’—say this instead.”
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«قبل/بعد حقيقي خلال 30 ثانية—بدون مبالغة.»
Cafés & F&B
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“Dubai heat hack: this iced [drink] recipe.”
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«أقوى عرض فطور اليوم—تفاصيل في أول ٥ ثواني.»
Recruitment/HR
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“Want 2× walk-ins? Change this first line.”
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«٤ أشياء تجيب مرشّحين أفضل لإفتتاح اليوم.»
E-commerce
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“This 9-word opener doubled cart adds.”
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«١٠ ثواني تخلّي الزائر يضيف للسلة—هكذا.»
Hook quality checklist (print this)
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Clear pain or promise in 12 words or less
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Local signal (Dubai/UAE or niche-specific)
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Visual thumbstop chosen (motion/text/gesture)
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Onscreen by 0.0–0.3s (no slow intro)
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Caption starts with the same line
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3 variants tested; metrics logged
Final thoughts
Hooks won’t fix a weak offer, but they will get your best offers seen. Start with three formulas above, keep them hyper-specific to UAE, and let your numbers pick the winner.
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